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- Need to change the left line of the yellow book to a more inclined angle
- Need to work on the shape of the grey lid
It was at this stage that I think I have misunderstood the exercise aim.
- I have used more than 4 objects (but could count books as 1 ;-))
- I need to have made a study of tonal variation in my sketches
However,
- I have worked in broad areas of colour and then worked on it analytically
- I know I have observed colours and have done well in replicating as best I can
Now I have reanalysed the exercise I think I will finish it rather than repeat it; I have worked on it in the way it requires, maybe more tonal study early on would have been helpful.

Really happy with the way this is going. But I really need to move on as this is only an exercise.
- I am definitely watching the development of tone
- I would work on the lines of perspective more if this was an assignment
- Tidy up the yellow book